Corbin:
The Eager Younger Brother
Most Likely to Say
Something Along These Lines:
“Can
I come?” or “What are you doing?”
Description of Character:
Full
of fun and adventure, Corbin has a personality similar to his older brother,
Raynold. Always eager to help in any way he can, his dream is to become a
farmer like his father. He hates to be left out of anything, and because of
this he sometimes gets in trouble for sticking his nose in where it doesn’t
belong. Naturally curious about everything, he tends to ask a lot of questions,
which sometimes is a nuisance to those who don’t know his ways. If fact, almost
everything that comes out of his mouth is a question, but his family doesn’t
mind this, and even answers what questions they can.
Book Excerpt(s):
Alice
sat down with a sigh of contentment, and Diana and Alyssa quickly followed her
lead. The whole atmosphere of the stranger’s home was so welcoming, the girls
felt at home right away. When their guide went to get himself cleaned up, he
left the girls to the open stares of his younger brother, and the more
concealed stares of the older sister.
“I’m
Corbin,” The younger boy said suddenly, his blue eyes fixed on Alice.
He
seemed to be waiting for her to say something, so she smiled and said, “I’m
Alice.”
There
was a silence. Then again, “I’m Corbin,” This time his statement was directed,
along with a blue-eyed stare, at Alyssa.
She
smiled right away and said, “I’m Alyssa.”
Another
pause, then yet again, “I’m Corbin,” His statement and stare directed in
Diana’s direction.
She
couldn’t help a smile as well and said, “I’m Diana.”
Another,
longer, silence before he spoke again. “Corbin means brave. I’m very brave. Are
you brave?” he gave this question, along with another stare, at Alice.
She
was at a loss for words at first. “Um… well, not really.” She smiled.
“Sometimes I do something brave. But I’m always afraid when I do it.”
Corbin
processed this for a few minutes, then, seeming to except Alice, he said, “You
can call me Cor.” There was a shorter pause. Then, by way of explanation; “My
brother calls me Cor.”
Suddenly
he turned to Alyssa and would have undoubtedly repeated the scene again, but
his sister came up behind him and placed her hand on his shoulder. That
silenced any further talking from him for the moment.
“I’m
Bettina. I hope you will forgive Corbin’s questions. We don’t have a lot of
strangers here.” She spoke quietly, but with such a calm confidence, that the
girls immediately felt that here was someone to respect. Although the older
girl was barely taller than them, she seemed to carry herself with an air of
superior wisdom.
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Raynold
chuckled and strapped the food to Peace. Just as he was about to mount, a
sleepy eyed Corbin stumbled into the barn and looked up into the face of his
older brother.
“Can
I come?” He asked after a loud yawn.
Raynold
grinned and ruffled Corbin’s hair, making it stand on end. “Not this time Cor,”
He answered.
“Why
not?” Corbin wanted to know.
“Because
how will Pa be able to harvest his crops if all his help is gone? He needs your
muscle to bring in our food for the winter.”
“Oh,”
Corbin replied. “I suppose I should stay then.”
“’Atta
man, Cor,” Raynold replied with a wink at the girls.
The
three of them stifled the urge to giggle, and quickly turned to their horses so
that Corbin wouldn’t see their twitching mouths. They led the horses out of the
stable and then mounted.
Ahhh! I'm loving these character spotlights! One sure outcome is it makes you (the reader) want to read the book! :)
ReplyDeleteCorbin sounds like he's a really fun character! I can't wait to read more about him!
I'm so glad you're enjoying these! :D I have one more character spotlight and then on to giving you more of Alice & Alyssa! :)
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