Oh, and by the way, I just realized it was the Fourth of July!! Wow. Hope you all have a wonderful time celebrating the signing of the Declaration of Independence...one of the most famous writings in history. Sadly, I doubt any of my writings will get that famous...but hey, one can dream, right?? ;)
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But otherwise, without further ado:
Chapter Ten: A Civilization
Authority
Neil
Ferric stared at the screen in front of him with an unholy glint in his eyes.
After all these years, his revenge would finally be satisfied. His computer
monitor shut itself off but he didn’t bother to reawaken it.
“Bush!”
he shouted suddenly.
His
secretary scurried into the room. Amy Bush, a petite blonde woman with
baby-blue eyes, was dressed in a smart business suit and knee length pencil
skirt. She stood at attention, fiddling with the bottom of the jacket
nervously. “Sir?” she queried carefully.
“The
space ship from Earth malfunctioned,” he stated, eyeing the woman coldly and
getting right to the point. Neil Ferric was not one to mince words.
“I
see,” she replied in the same careful voice.
“They
are still sending an automated launch pod towards us with five of the original
thirteen Chosen. Captain Athin Long gave us the estimated arrival of three
weeks. I’d like you to switch the tracking monitor from the first ship to the
launch pod so we know exactly when they arrive.”
“Yes
sir,” Amy answered. The smart woman had been one of the first ten people to be
sent to Tridiom from Earth, and she had been living as Neil’s secretary since
then. She knew Neil almost better then he knew himself and immediately saw that
this launch pod was no ordinary launch pod. Something deep in her boss’s eyes
caused the young woman to give an involuntary shudder that she quickly
repressed.
Neil
Ferric dismissed the woman with a wave of his thin hand. He had things to do.
The
minute his secretary disappeared from the room, he went back to his computer
and opened a new folder labeled “NalpLive” and hid it in his classified
computer drive. He sat back before beginning to type and let the simmering
anger grow in calculated jumps. A twisted sort of joy came from being able to
finally get revenge.
It
had started right before World War III. Neil had been an ambassador between all
the major powers of the time, but he had stayed loyal to the only person he
truly loved: himself. The nations at the time had been trying to work together
to gain world peace, but Neil saw his job as a chance to gain more power than
anyone in the world had ever had.
He
caused WWIII almost single handedly by spreading false information from one
nation to another. The war started and he watched in silent glee as nation
after nation fell, country after country become devastated, and population
after population dwindle into almost nothing.
Neil’s
jaw worked in frustration as he relived the moment when he had thought that the
power would become his. Rightfully his. He
had started the war, and he had thought he would end it after he was sure that
there would be no objection to his leadership.
Then,
a young lawyer had singlehandedly won over the hearts of the people and took
the title, his title, “President of
the United Nations”. Arron Lake had it all: a lovely wife, two adorable sons,
billions of dollars, charm, good looks, and the media loved him. He had
promised peace and the ability to remake their planet into what it had been
before the war had torn the lands apart and made it almost impossible to grow
food for the slowly growing population. Him and his precious space exploration
plans.
It
should have been Neil Ferric. He was going to become the hero in the eyes of
the survivors of WWIII, but instead it was Arron Lake. He was going to keep the
population under his control and force everyone to follow his rules, but
instead Arron with his dashing grin had told people they didn’t have to worry
about overpopulation, he had had a plan to spread the younger people into
farther planets that his space exploration program he owned had found over the
course of several years. A decade of planning, several years of war…it had all
been for naught.
The
civilization authority rubbed his carefully groomed beard in frustration before
continuing to type. The nerve of the new president had been a constant pain in
Neil’s life.
Arron
Lake and Neil Ferric had been opposing runners for the highest position in the
world. Neil had given Arron grudging respect for being willing to take him on,
but that had developed into a deep-seated hatred when he realized Arron was
going to win the hearts of the people. It had all been “friendly competition”
for Arron, but for Neil it was a continuation of years of planning. And he had
failed.
After
Arron had successfully taken the title and role of President of the United
Nations, Neil had shut himself up and started a new plan: one of revenge and
gaining back what he had worked so hard towards.
It
was years later when Arron approached him as an old friend in a coffee shop and
asked about his life. Neil had filled him in with lies of a job and family he
didn’t have and then asked him about his life. Arron was free in telling his
“old friend” all about what his family and career was like now, including
several details about his two sons and what he hoped for their future. Then,
the real reason Arron wanted to talk to him surfaced. The President of the
United Nations had finally found, with the help of his space exploration
program, ISEC, enough planets to begin putting his hope for the rapidly growing
population on earth to expand.
“I
need your help Neil,” he had said with a serious face.
“Oh?”
Neil had responded carefully, arching an eyebrow and smiling. “And how would
little old me do that for the great and mighty President of the United
Nations?” He had forced the sarcasm from his voice and replaced it with a
teasing air.
The
president had laughed. “I need some leaders to be in charge of the planets
we’ve found. Good men who will rule over the people I send there with a fair
hand, but strict when needed. I’ve always admired your ability to lead, and I
thought of you first when the problem for proper leadership on each planet came
up at one of our meetings.”
“I’m
honored Arron,” Neil had said. “What will you need me to do?”
Arron
charged enthusiastically into his plans. “We’ve found eighty seven livable
planets outside our galaxy that we’ll start sending teens to soon. First
though, we’re sending ten what I dubbed “Civilization Authorities” there first
to cement into the place the civilization system.
“The
layout of authorities is this: Alpha Civilization Authority, which will be you
if you’re willing, it’s the highest office; you’ll be in charge of everyone
else.
“There
will be a Civilization Secretary, which you’ll choose who you want out of the
nine others we bring. The secretary’s job is to monitor the traffic of teens
and eventually other citizens as they come to the planet and leave into various
positions and make sure paperwork and tasks are being done properly. The
Secretary will be the go between you and the other, lesser Civilization
Authorities.
“The remaining eight people will be in
charge of various teens in various positions. Two will be in charge of
Warriors: namely the soldiers, police officers, fire fighters, etc. Two will be
in charge of the Builders: namely architects, artists, interior designers,
carpenters, etc. Two will be in charge of Medics: namely doctors, nurses,
paramedics, therapists, etc. Lastly, the remaining two will be in charge of
making sure supplies are safely delivered and exported possibly to and from
Tridiom. My scientists as of yet don’t know the build of Tridiom except that it
is able to support life, but we are hoping that some of the builders will be
able to excavate some things of possible value. Does that make sense?”
Neil
went over the information in his head. The idea was a tempting one, and one
with many possibilities. With a curt nod, he accepted the position.
Now,
a few more years had passed, and Neil had been regretting the action. He felt
somewhat like the general Napoleon Bonaparte from ancient history when he had
been banished to Elba. Tridiom and its civilization system were too small for
the likes of Neil Ferric. He wanted power. And power was all too easy right
now.
He
shut his computer down, and leaned back in his chair. Well, now he would force
the President of the United Nations to listen to him. With his sons as the
prize he held for ransom, he would be able to twist Arron around his little
finger. The president’s love for his boys was known galaxy-wide, the one
weakness he had was his family. He would do anything to keep them safe and give
them a good life.
A
wicked spark appeared in Neil’s eyes and a slow smile spread across his face.
His talent was finding people’s weaknesses and using them for his own good. He
reveled in others’ pain and discomfort…if it meant that he could gain something
in the end.
When
Amy Bush came back to report that she had done what he asked and hand him the
report and progress of the launch pod, he was in a fine mood.
“Thank
you Amy,” he said with a smile. “You may take the rest of the day off, I have a
few things left to do in my office, but I think we could all use some time off.
What do you say?”
His
secretary gave her boss a look of disbelief. Earlier he had nearly bit her head
off when she had come in to hear about the launch pod, and now he was giving
her a day off!
She
thanked him and left, suddenly wary and a little worried at his confusing mood
swings. He made her nervous. And she wasn’t exactly sure why.
When
the door shut for the second time behind his secretary, Neil rolled over to the
bookshelf that decorated one of the four walls in his private study. He trusted
Amy to let the eight other civilization members know that their boss had given
them a rare day off, and he knew that their reaction would be to immediately go
to their civilization residences located only a few blocks from the
civilization offices before he might change his strange offer. Nothing was
farther from Neil’s mind however. He would be completely alone in the building
within a few minutes, and then he would begin really working.
Pulling
out one of the books, he flipped through it until he found the page he was
looking for. He quickly scanned it and added it to his “NalpLive” file on his
computer. Then, after checking down the strangely empty hallway outside his study
in case there were any stragglers, he sat back down on his desk chair and
opened his computer.
As
Amy had said, the tracking device was now on the launch pod, not the main ship.
He watched for a moment the small white dot move slowly towards the larger
green dot that was Tridiom. So far, everything was as expected. The launch pod
was on autopilot, and hopefully the kids on board had been told not to touch
anything, and told what to do if anything out of the ordinary happened.
Neil
hated when things were out of his control, and he feverishly wished that
nothing went wrong, just so he could get his hands on the small bait sooner and
therefore on far bigger bait later. A satisfied smile grew across his face.
Revenge had taken a while, but it seemed as if fate had finally given him what
he wanted. The pawns were walking right into a trap that would end in a fork
for his opponent. Life was good.
I've just discovered your blog, and I really love it thus far! This snippet was so well-written - even though I haven't read anything else from this story and was kind of plopped down in the middle of it, I still got sucked in right away. I'm definitely excited for the next chapter!
ReplyDeleteEllie | On the Other Side of Reality
Wow! Thank you! Neil will be flattered. ;)
DeleteI'll definitely be checking out your blog! I love your blog's title. :)
Your villian is horrible. Very creepy...
ReplyDeleteHaha...he'll be thrilled to hear that. ;)
DeleteOhhh....creepy guy :P
ReplyDeleteGreat section though, Rebekah! Interesting look into Neil's past. Very interesting :D
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed!
DeleteGreat next part to the story Rebekah!!
ReplyDeleteI like how you gave us a glimpse into the past. :)
I was just curious though about how Niel knew the Lake boys were part of the five who were still coming?
Did earth send a message with the names of the kids on board and that's what we find him reading at the beginning of the chapter?
(sorry, sometimes I overthink about things when I read) ;)
Yay! Glad you liked it!
DeleteIt does mention it. Have you read the other parts? *points to the 'Stories in Progress' page* If not, you might want too...otherwise the story may be confusing. ;)
And no prob. I need the editing help. Trust me. I cannot do this on my own! I appreciate all feedback!! :D
DeleteAha! Okay, it was 2 chapters ago, that way I forgot about it! Plus when I read it I think my mind went read he told earth. :p
ReplyDeleteSorry, life has been SO hectic around here lately I sometimes feel as if I were going insane! ;)
I'm glad the confusion is cleared! :) I know how life can get busy and make you forget parts of different plots...especially if you're reading a ton of different books like I usually am! ;)
DeleteNooo!!!!!! *hides Destin and Fovil in a closet where Ferric can't find them* Woah, Rebekah, you've really snagged my interest. :D
ReplyDeleteOh good! *rubs hands together evilly*
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