Thursday, October 1, 2015

Alice & Alyssa: New Cover Design

After deciding on a subtitle I liked, I went onto Lulu and changed the whole cover of my book. I think it pops out a little more with the new style, but I want YOUR opinion.

 
Sorry, the picture isn't very good quality...*sigh*
What do you think?
Is this a more interesting cover?
How do you like the subtitle: "When Fantasy Becomes Reality"?
Should I change anything?
God bless, and thank you all SO MUCH for your advice! You have no idea how much it helps me! :D
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8 comments:

  1. Jesseca DawnOctober 1, 2015 at 8:05 PM

    I love the black! It matches the pen and it does make it stand out more. ;) The subtitle is great!
    Maybe it's just me, but the green font doesn't seem to go very well with the cover. But like I said, it may be just me!
    Everything else looks awesome!! :D

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    1. 4rmeddyOctober 2, 2015 at 10:48 AM

      What color would you suggest Jesseca? I didn't really like the green either, but both black and white don't really work...so I figured I would have to add a color. However, it might look better if I actually have the book in hand...maybe I could take some pics of the book and post them. Then you can tell me what you think of it on an actual book.

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    2. Jesseca DawnOctober 2, 2015 at 12:04 PM

      Is there any way you can get the font to match the tan background? Then you'd have black and black and tan and tan. Just an idea. ;)

      Yeah, that's true! Definitely post some pictures of it once you get it. :)

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    3. 4rmeddyOctober 2, 2015 at 2:19 PM

      I'll try. It'll be hard to get the right shade though... We'll see.

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    4. Jesseca DawnOctober 2, 2015 at 7:02 PM

      It was just a suggestion! Like I said, it looks awesome! :)

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  2. Faith P.October 2, 2015 at 10:35 AM

    I really like it, Rebekah! The only thing I see is where the middle of the A in Alice is at the border of the black and it's kind of difficult to see. :) It looks great, though!

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    1. 4rmeddyOctober 2, 2015 at 10:47 AM

      Yeah...the hardest part of the book was getting the font right. And after an hour of work, it still didn't let me bring the title up more. *sigh* One of the hard things about self-publishing your books is you can't be too picky. I'll try a little more before sending it out into the public, but it'll be a hard thing to fix. Thanks for the advice though! :)

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  3. Bethany R.October 7, 2015 at 7:43 PM

    I agree with both Jesseca and Faith, I think that a better color for the font would be much better. Thanks for letting us give you our input!

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